March 3 - Today we focused on constructing a strong literary argument paragraph about Wild and whether discomfort is necessary for meaningful personal growth. After working through the claim-evidence-analysis structure, explain which part of the paragraph was most challenging for you and why. Do you find it more difficult to create an arguable claim or to move beyond summary in your analysis?

Response: When creating the claim-evidence-analysis structure during our body paragraph exercise, the biggest challenge for me was the analysis of my evidence. I would constantly be making up other claims that wasn't supported by my evidence and also after I had already made my first claim. My analysis would stray off from the evidence/quote that I provided, and it was hard for me to correct this mistake when doing my revisions. 

Summary: Today, we did a body paragraph exercise for our upcoming essay.

Reflection: The claim-evidence-analysis structure in a body paragraph must have all 3 elements mastered in order to create a well written paragraph.

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